'Fractured for Life' by Naomi Palmer     

Reviewer: Rupert

Outstanding! I would not expect such vivid imagery and subtle use of text from someone still in college, truly incredible. 5 stars!

'He's been listening to Morrissey' by Carrie Holroyd

Reviewer: James Benwick

I enjoyed the humour, in fact the whole thing read very well. Carrie Holroyd should go on writing as she will get published, if she hasn't been already.

By Hook or By Crook by A J Kirby    

Reviewer: Anna Stephens

A simply written but deep-feeling piece about a boy's - and subsequently a man's - relationship with his father. The piece accurately describes the ease with which a child can misinterpret everything about a parent until, when the inevitablehappens, they are made aware that really, the only thing they never understood was how much they were loved and how it is - always - the littlest things that come to mean the most. An extremely tender and insightful piece of writing. I look forward to reading more of this author's work.

 

 

'Conus and the Curse of the Dragon' by Stephanie Dodd

Reviewer: Ed

Liked it! Different, in a good way. Imagination and a quirky, funny style but also a serious story about love. Hope she writes more.

'Fractured For Life' by Naomi Palmer

Reviewer: Reader

The detail is inexplicable. It's as if I am watching an opening sequence of a film; I love it. A brilliant and intriguing first chapter. Is there a second? I want to know the plot as to what the character is going to do and so on.

'Fractured for life' by Naomi Palmer

Reviewer: Graham Bradshaw

Hello, Naomi if you still check this and read reviews just to let you know that I think you've got a bright future, even though I'm not so sure about the whole ollie thing. Keep writing! I too carry a pad around with me, and if I don't I've found myself writing on myself just so I don't forget, I know what it's like. Great chapter, GOOD LUCK!